19 June 2013

Write Tribe Wednesday Prompt # 6

The phone rang.

"Hello, Roshni!"

"Oh Hi! Rahul!"

"I have to say something to you."

"Bolo"

"Listen, you said I was not paying attention to you these days.

There is a reason behind this"

"Why are you silent, Roshni?

Listen, things have been so boring between us lately.

I have been wondering....."

"Say something Roshni"


"Rahul.... I never felt anything was wrong between us.  I always felt so comfortable with you."


"Don't cry Roshni!  It will spoil everything"


"Spoil? Spoil what, Rahul?"


"Oh, now you are angry."


"Speak up, say what you want to."


"Now you sound really angry. 

Alright I wanted to say that things have been boring between us.

Humdrum.  I don't want things to go on this way."


Silence.


"I want you to marry me, Roshni"

"WHAT?  YOU SILLY GOOSE!"

Rahul covered his face with his hand and burst out laughing.




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23 comments:

  1. Haha. So did he mean it or didn't he? I'd like to think he meant it - but when she didn't take it seriously, he also laughed it off. :-)

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  2. Raja,

    I am sure he meant it. I will know once I get their wedding card.

    Come along with me to their wedding ;)

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  3. Not only a happy ending Girls, but a mushy romantic happy ending.

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  4. Aawwwlieeee
    I am a sucker for happy endings... So cuteee .yeyeye Ava..:D

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  5. Ava this is fabulous!!The words flow so smoothly.The conversation between them comes to a happy ending. Nice!

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  7. Lovely !
    uRS IS THE FIRST POST where the man is laughing :) cool
    err. if u dont mind can u remove that captcha-- word check. its tough when we want to type comments

    I type words twice / thrice :( eevvery time

    thanks

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  8. Me, Janu,Sulekha, Ushaji, pinash, afshan.
    Thank you dears.

    Afshan : have removed the word verification. :) Sorry used to get a lot of spam, hence had put that in.

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  9. Oh you made it funny. Ha ha... Cute one. :)

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  10. Who could have predicted that ending? Not me, for sure.

    Made me laugh.

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  11. Loved the twist and the happy ending!

    Kathy
    http://gigglingtruckerswife.blogspot.com

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  12. That was yet another happy ending :) Good one !

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  13. Oh wow Ava what a build up to the end. It sure did conjure all kinds of stories inside my head :-)

    Richa

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